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The Unwanted Writings



The DP tags your poetry "inappropriate". So what are you gonna do? You can't just let your words go unsaid! So, you put it down here, at The Unwanted Writings. This is where Edgar Allen Poe, Walt Whitman, and many other famous poets would have gone, their poetry deemed "inappropriate". Maybe you're just tired of having to resubmit your poetry so many times, because it seems that no matter how much you study it and look over it, it never goes with the Holy Format.
Whatever your reason, I hope you have found the place to put your poetry where others may enjoy it.


    Rules:
(Yes, there a some rules)

1. This not the place to put hate poetry, or poetry that is way too sexualy explicit.

2. Please try not to put in poetry that has a large amount of expletives. A few are alright, just not three or four every line.

3. Put the title at the beginning and the author at the end, and try to use as the best grammar you can. Go by what others have, but other than that, there's no format.

4. Also, make sure to put your poem at the end of the page. Thanks!

Ok, I've decided to put some "polishers" up here. Polisher is a person who fixes the lower case, emboldens things, adds (') those, etc. Polishers have to be on alot, and the reasons I have their names up here is so that if they accidentally mess your poem up, you can talk to them about it and get it fixed. I'm not in need of any polishers, but who knows when I will be? Here they are, anyway:

Polishers
[Your Favorite Stranger]
[hh]
If your poem has been messed up, just give one of us a yell!

That said, write away!





Woo i'm soo honoured to be the first person on here!

My Family Portrait

Daddy brought a gun home today
He said he wouldn't use it.
He said that mommy broke his heart
He said she abused it.
And daddy said his life is over.

Daddy and mommy gave me Ella.
Last night daddy told us we were going to take a bath
But daddy just stood there touching us.
Ella cried but daddy laughed.

Daddy took Ella to the living room.
He told her to lie down.
Daddy unzipped his pants,
Ella started to frown.
Ella screamed.

I ran to Daddy's study
And rumaged through his stuff.
I worried about what he'd say,
He hasn't hit me enough.
Daddy never smiles anymore though.

I found the gun in daddy's drawer.
It was dark and shiny and big,
But i heard Ella screaming my name so I ran.
Daddy's gun was dangerous
But it would fix everything.

Suddenly I heard Daddy shouting naughty words
That he used to call my mommy.
I ran into the room but Ella was naked.
She started crying and ran to me
But daddy had a knife.

But daddy walked towards El
Holding it in his hand.
And Ella ran towards me
But daddy still screamed his demand.
He told her to lie down but she kept going.


I didnt like the way daddy was acting.
He wasn't normally like this.
He loved me, El and mommy so much
I wanted to shoot but I'd miss.
So i took El to the kitchen.

I sat her on the worktop
And told her not to worry.
"Soon Daddy will be gone
But he's really really sorry
That he hurt you El."

I went back to Daddy.
I saw him sitting and crying.
He saw the gun I was holding
And he said he was sorry
But I knew he was lying.

I went up to Daddy and stood up tall
And so,
I whispered the words "I'm sorry Daddy
You have to go."
And Daddy fell to the ground.

[ninja.kicks.ass]




Dirty Girl

Dirty girl, on the street.
To make her trip you stick out your feet.
There she goes, watch her fall,
Run away as she cracks her skull.
Naive strangers, telling me
They let her go, in death's she free.
Telling lies to pass the time,
Letting smack tell them it's fine.
Chain reaction, here we go.
The cops are coming; quick, let's go.
Every man for their own lives,
Everyone's living a lie.
Smokers watching me,
They only pretend to be free.
I hold the truth, I've got the light.
No one's all right in nobody's sight.
Dirty girl was on the street
The smokers were watching me.
To make her trip, I stuck out my feet.
I let her go, in death she's free.

[nokaredes]




Pain

You start getting tired,
struggling for breath,
The pain creeps up,
and worsens the stress.

Life deteriorates
before your eyes.
The pain creeps up,
for all your lies.

The destruction starts,
to take its toll.
The pain creeps up,
and eats your soul.

You find a gun,
pointed at your head.
The pain creeps up,
and leaves you dead.

Written by [tenshi-ryuu]




Who

What do you see, eyes, what do you see?
Are you thinking when you are looking at me-
A chubby girl, panties all in a bunch,
The quiet kid who sits with outcasts at lunch,
Who’s the girl with whom you’d rather be friends,
When you know because of you her faith in god will soon end,
Who seems to look over the signals you send,
And forever is nothing more than a friend,
Who now has cancer because of the choices you made,
Whose glances you dodge until her face fades.
Is that what you’re thinking? Is that what you see?
Then open your eyes world,
YOU’RE NOT LOOKING AT ME!


I’ll tell you who I am, as I walk my slow pace,
As I am surrounded by people who don’t see my face:
I’m a person with feelings that are yet to be felt,
Because it seems no romantic cards have been dealt;
A twinkle of hope is still in here somewhere,
A sought after light that I treat with great care;
A time son will come when that light will go out,
A time in the near future, I hold no doubt;
At my place, now I have the bottom rung to myself,
It’s a position I relish, but it’s my own little shelf,
A veteran at irony, a master of desire,
I hope that my twinkle will one day be fire.

written by [angrybuddhas.]




That Instant


As I wait to cross the street
I see the “walk” sign blink.


Although I've heard of drunk-driver deaths
I still don't stop to think.


I take some steps into the street
And hear a sudden screech.


Next thing I know I'm stuck to steel
Like some blood-sucking leech.


In that instant I didn't stop to think
About the horrid consequences of taking just one drink.


Then my life flashed before my eyes
In just one sudden thought.


All the moments good and bad
That every day had brought.


I hear paramedics saying
Prayers under their breath.


But that Instant of carelessness
Brought me to my death.



         Written by [Moving on in Life]




I Did


Went to a party
heres what they said
have a drink
just one drink
so i did


started dancing
drinking hard
someone passed me a pill
told me to take it
so i did


loopied up
having fun
saw the bowl
they said hit it once
so i did


a few more hits
a ton more drinks
i saw the line
they said snort it
so i did


trippin hard
seeing stars
saw the boy
he said come to my car
so i did


sweaty bodies
empty minds
the condom tore
he said dont care
so i didn't


nine months later
can't see my feet
swelled so big
im paying the price
for what i did

took the gun
wrote the note
but it to my head
blew the hole
now im dead

        Written by [evil penguin]



The other side



A bully once came up to me
 Came up to me and said


"Give me all your lunch money,
 Or I'll lodge my fist inside your head"


In shock and awe and horrendous fear
 I forked over all my cash


I couldn't help but ask myself
 "why was he so harsh?"


Now I stand, just right here
 Down an empty hall


With someone's colloar in my fist,
 And his back against the wall


One side tells me to beat him up
 Because that's half the fun


But the other side screams
 "drop him! Just drop the kid and run!"


SO quickly I make a simple choice,
 As I lower him to the ground


I let him go and watch him run
 Because a new path I have found

         Written by [Moving on in Life]




Untitled

Wherefore art thou, oh my love?
No one knows.
Except to say thou aren't at home.
I gasp then run;
'Tis as I feared;
Thou hadst spoken of thy death as it neared.
I run; I stumble, I trip and fall,
But knowing i must get to thee above all
Driveth me onward, maketh me take
Desperate measures to follow in thy wake.
I know where to find thee,
Thou explained it quite clear,
How to get from here to there.
And so I ran, with heart beating,
Legs flying, I ran to the place i knew thou i would'st find.
And find thee I did: thy silent deed was done:
Thou layest quite cold in a puddle of blood.
I threw myself down, pulled thee into my arms,
Crying and sobbing and kissing thee hard.
But nothing happened, twas all for naught:
Thy beautiful soul, Death's minions had caught.
I looked down at mine body, covered with thy own life,
Inspired by thought, I searched for the knife
That had stabbed my love's heart.
I clutched it, then whispered, "I come where thou art."
So saying, I plunged the knife deep.
A moment of pain, then I fell in a heap.
The last moments of my life, my end of the race,
But it was soon over and I was greeted by thy face.

Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]




Broken Mirror

I look into my mirror
And she stares back at me.
Long we glare at one another;
No end is close to see.

Who's eyes within this face are set?
Who's hair of golden hue?
Who's tears are these that stream
From eyes of darkest blue?

Who's face is this, so very sad?
Who's eyes with shadows wrought?
Who's brows now crease together
With every weary thought?

I smile at this stranger,
Conjured from out my mind.
To my surprise, she smiles back;
At least she has the time.

I laugh aloud, and so does she,
'Tis like we're both the same,
Soon I find myself wondering
'Does she maybe have a name?'

We start off simply looking,
And then we get to talking,
Soon, we do it everyday;
I before the mirror stalking.

I stare into the mirror;
But not her face I see:
Instead, there is a demon there,
Reaching out for me.

I try to run away,
But the demon from the mirror
Follows, grabbing for me,
Its hands are getting nearer.

I get a close up view of it,
And to my horror find
The face it wears upon its head
Is nothing less than mine!

Terrified beyond all words,
I look, and pray to find
Something with which to break
The mirror, left behind.

A book, it is my saviour!
I throw it at the glass,
The demon- now it shatters,
Upon the lively-hood of my past.

I fall with it to the floor,
I share this demon's pain.
Horrified, I realize
All my efforts were in vain:

The mirror held the image
Of what I had become.-
My mind now oh so broken-
My body begins to numb.

I stare blindly at the mirror,
Now shattered on the floor,
Millions of tiny images
Of what is never more.

      
            Written by [Your Favorite Stranger]




Peace

I stare into the mirror
Eyes of deep brown look back
Shadows pain in blood all behinde them
Like glass holding in an ocean
Of crimsion red and blue
No one knows what I've seen no not even you
I've told all my secrets and then a little more
But still you dont know what lies behinde the door
The door that leads into me
Like a rotten apple core
Slowly ripping apart my insides
Making me all torn
Cries and sobs escape me
In the darkest night
I think that I'm Alright
But we all know im not
Im destrought with thoughts of death
Losing my last breath
Horror pain and murder are in my little world
Twist and turning mixing together in a whirl
No one knows whats happening in my little mind
No one trys to find out by being oh so kind
As to cut open my head
Lay upon my corpse
Kill me on the bed
See the crimson blood ive shed
And whisper sweet words into my ear
Kiss away the tears from blank eyes staring
No one even caring
That as you pleasure your self
I'm already dead
On the inside no one sees
That im not who you think
I'm gone from this world
My body begans to stink
Try to wash me clean in your perfect porcelain sink
But my Hands wont wash clean of this blood
That you lowered on me
From a knife so keen to your senses
No one even saw
The terror in my eyes
But its ok
Because soon youll be found
And my body rest in peace


       Written by [Ego Diligo Tu]




Imagine



Every morning I am thanking my stars
Feel so lucky having you in my arms
Wouldn't be the same without you,babe
There's not a thing about you I would change
I'm incomplete when you're far away
And when you're here,you make me whole again
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I foud someone who will make me say this and mean it.


Couldn't imagine life without you,
I want to wrap my arms around you
You're like a miracle in the month of March
I just want to kiss your face.


Sometimes I have to stop and stare
Might even run my fingers through your hair
Just to see that this is not a dream
I've got to see you smiling back at me
And I'm okay as long as you're okay
Don't have to ask, I know you feel the same
At first I really didn't trust it or believe it
I found someone who could make me say this and mean it.

       Written by [~!~Sweet - Diamond~!~]




Tribute to our Armed Forces

From Pearl Harbor
To Iraq

On us they
Haven't turned their back.

Fighting all night
And fighting all day

Struggling under fire
To keep hostiles at bay.

Fighting for freedom
to uphold all our rights.

Yet when they come home
They hide from "The Lights".

They don't ask for fortune
And they don't ask for fame

Because while they're out there
They all share the same name.

So this is my tribute
For Honor's the call

For the men and women
Who ask for nothing at all.

©2005 Brandon Aaron Bessman

Written by [Moving on in Life]



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2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol, we haven't really fought yet (me and cassy) so i don't really know what she is exactly, but i don't think anything supernatural beside demon *winks* oh good so you've heard about that too...interesting

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *nods adn winks* hmm think i should make a second page for Suicide Letter?

2005-07-21 [this user is dead]: uhmmmm

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: hmmh....yes, i think more than one page makes it seem smaller and easier to read you know? and easier to get at....but you know, that's just me

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: well i think im goign to starts a second page after i tye up the first oen i jsut added mroe to it

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: gah

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i know i see it, i'm trying to wade through comments and find the time to read it >,< i shall read it though

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: uh huh now i totally lost

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: lol

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: Suicide Letter is a, umm, story of hers cassy

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs* if thats what it can be called lol

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: ok

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: your welcome to go read it

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: eulogy i suppose...it's very good sander, i enjoyed it a lot and it's not done yet

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: idk if i can it might take awhile

2005-07-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol probably...hehe make it your summer reading

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: yea i dont think there is enough summer left for that

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: its not that big

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: no but im a slow reader cause i concentrate on a whole bunch of things when i read not just on what im reading

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: ahhhhhh well you dont need to read it its just open if ya wnat to

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: yea ill read

2005-07-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: okey dokey pokey

2005-07-21 [~devils_child~]: yea

2005-07-22 [Your Favorite Stranger]: i presonally think it's very interesting, full of insights into someones head...but i like psychology anyway, so you know...also, it's very well written, shows a picture..just like msot of liz's writing *winks at liz*

2005-07-23 [Moving on in Life]: I missed alot of stuff

2005-07-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blushes* shh jamie god

2005-07-24 [~devils_child~]: *giggles*

2005-07-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins* haha, made you blush! but it's true...*nods*

2005-07-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at terini* yeah you did...you cried, i asked for you, liz gave you to me, then she wrapped up you, umm, odd pokable places, then she let all of us out...you're filled in now

2005-07-24 [~devils_child~]: really

2005-07-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs i never unwrapped him

2005-07-24 [Your Favorite Stranger]: lol, well then ok, you're still wrapped terini, but out of the cage at least

2005-07-24 [~devils_child~]: *laughs*

2005-07-24 [tenshi-ryuu]: eh... I need to write another one... maybe when I get back home...

2005-07-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: oo that'd be kewl!...where are you now?

2005-07-26 [Moving on in Life]: Wrapped up in what? a blanket? a tarp?

2005-07-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *thinks* hmm, good question

2005-07-26 [Ego Diligo Tu]: medical tape

2005-07-27 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *falls over laughing*

2005-07-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles* jamie close your legs!*points out your still wearing what you are at guys*

2005-07-28 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *closes legs still laughing a bit and stands up* whoopsies

2005-07-28 [Ego Diligo Tu]: /laughs* hehe

2005-07-30 [Moving on in Life]: * cries* wearing what? I missed a shitload of stuff .. I want in on the cool and sexy details!

2005-07-30 [omgOMEGA]: Me too!

2005-07-30 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *laughs and shakes head* if you really want to know, it's at guys

2005-07-30 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles*

2005-07-30 [omgOMEGA]: Geez... you get up to alot on there don't you!

2005-07-30 [Ego Diligo Tu]: its our wiki

2005-07-30 [omgOMEGA]: true... okay I'll let you play!

2005-07-30 [Ego Diligo Tu]: hehe

2005-07-30 [omgOMEGA]: :)

2005-08-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: thank you carrot

2005-08-25 [omgOMEGA]: :))) That's okay. As long as you are happy.

2005-08-26 [Moving on in Life]: hmm...boredom slays me.

2005-08-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at terini carefully* slays you huh? that's not any good, i've recently spent a while nursing you back to health

2005-08-26 [Moving on in Life]: ok. I'll stay alive for you *huggles Forgotten* Love ya lots!

2005-08-26 [tenshi-ryuu]: heh... I would be one of the reasons for the nursing... meh... its all good now... cheers \/^n^\/

2005-08-26 [omgOMEGA]: I like monkeys. DUDE! \m/{@}{@}\m/

2005-08-26 [Moving on in Life]: oooh oooh aahh aahh aahh!

2005-08-27 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *hugs terini back* well thank you. *looks at tenshi warningly* yes you would be, ya little devil.

2005-08-28 [Moving on in Life]: I'm loved! yay! *loves forgotten*

2005-09-04 [omgOMEGA]: aaah *loves monkeys*

2005-09-06 [Moving on in Life]: *loves monkeys too!*

2005-09-06 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *smiles big* Buy my book pa pa pa please? its at http://www.lulu.com/content/159723 you knwo you want it lol its a book of all me poems! well so far or w/e there is i belive 61 in it

2005-09-06 [Moving on in Life]: poems are good, but I dun have the money to buy it. I'm FLAT BROKE.

2005-09-06 [Ego Diligo Tu]: i see

2005-09-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins and bounces about* i bought it, i bought it!!!!!!!!

2005-09-07 [Moving on in Life]: LMAO XD

2005-09-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at you*

2005-09-07 [Moving on in Life]: what?...don't look at me like that.....you look...hungry.....CANNIBAL! *points*

2005-09-07 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *grins, showing teeth* me? cannibal? neva

2005-09-07 [Moving on in Life]: *cowers in fear* Help...you saved my life, you know...

2005-09-07 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pats jamies head* calm down girl what did i tell you about eating people? its not aproprite to tell your friends it scares them

2005-09-09 [Moving on in Life]: *hides behind Love and cries*

2005-09-09 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pets terini on head *

2005-09-10 [Moving on in Life]: *hugs her leg*

2005-09-10 [Moving on in Life]: I are scareded

2005-09-10 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs almost mencingly* oh dont be she only eats when shes hungry and she just had a full course meal

2005-09-11 [omgOMEGA]: *runs around in circles*

2005-09-11 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *catchs carrot and puts her in a cage with a pizza*

2005-09-12 [Moving on in Life]: oh..I feel safe...sorta...But I feel safer with you *smiles up at her, still clinging to her leg*

2005-09-12 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs* people could get the wrong impression lol *pats terinis head*

2005-09-12 [Moving on in Life]: Oh well. Let em think bad thoughts...

2005-09-13 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *nods* okay but umm get off your knees i am in a skirt*laughs*

2005-09-13 [Moving on in Life]: * blushes and stands* oh..umm. I'm really sorry.....*turns his head away, unable to look her in the eye*

2005-09-14 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs and gives terini a hug* oh come come now you didnt even look so no worries!

2005-09-14 [omgOMEGA]: <img:http://elftown.lysator.liu.se/img/drawing/81310_1126728856.jpg>

2005-09-14 [Moving on in Life]: *hugs back* I know, but it's still not right...

2005-09-14 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs* ahh but it is since your not intrested in me that way so no worries!

2005-09-15 [omgOMEGA]: <img:http://elftown.lysator.liu.se/img/drawing/81310_1126728856.jpg>

2005-09-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *reads down, occassionally laughing* terini, you'd prolly be awee bit safer with me than her in all actuality...and what the heck is that dude supposed to be!!!??? do not say Dumbledore, or i WILL eat you!!!!

2005-09-15 [omgOMEGA]: DUMBLEDORE! Heheh The Classroom Of Wonders

2005-09-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *eats you*

2005-09-15 [omgOMEGA]: *jumps out through conviently placed hole in stomach* TaDAAA!

2005-09-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks down at stomach in wonder*

2005-09-15 [omgOMEGA]: Heehee

2005-09-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *runs around looking for something to cover the conveniently placed hole in stomach*

2005-09-15 [omgOMEGA]: *destroys everything that might have been able to cover the convientlyplaced hole in F_T's stomach*

2005-09-15 [Your Favorite Stranger]: fine be that way *heals stomach by self*

2005-09-15 [omgOMEGA]: *continually stabs F_T's stomach*

2005-09-15 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *seperates the to sigihng* coem ceom chidlren behanve and no im a bit more decent that was kind of only to tease little ben

2005-09-15 [omgOMEGA]: muffin.

2005-09-15 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *puts carrot in another cage with No holes*

2005-09-15 [Moving on in Life]: Who said I wasn't interested in you, Forgotten? ;)

2005-09-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: What nto intrested in who me or lovely jamie who i may add is freshly on the market* Puts jamie on teh pedastal and shines her up really purty like in a wedding dress*

2005-09-16 [Moving on in Life]: ((Jamie?))

2005-09-16 [Ego Diligo Tu]: ((forgotten))*pokes fatness*

2005-09-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: man i have a lot to do...*heals stomach* haha, little ben?; *bnecomes lost then is put on a pedastal in...a dress* *glares at liz for revealing true identity to the populace* *btw, it;s not in a wedding dress, but [Sacha Nikolai] has the best pic of me i have...* now, liz, what fatness?? i know i got it, but geez,, you're so heartless...Terini- you have lost me, liz ((love doesn't hurt)) was the one who said you weren't interested in her...and if she put me on that pedestal for no reason....*eyes begin to turn black*

2005-09-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles* my fatness not yours*hugs jamie* calm your self young child for all shall be okay

2005-09-18 [Moving on in Life]: ((Oh, ok)) okies, thanks for the clear up. love ya, forgotten ;)

2005-09-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *smiles at liz* bah, in my mind, you have no fatness, and in my mind is all that matters to me *hugs back* i am calmed then...*nods to terini*not a problem, someone has to clear things p once in a while...love yas too ;D

2005-09-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs slightly manicly and then catches self* ive made 39.40 so far on my book selling!

2005-09-18 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *looks at liz warily and unconsciously takes a step away* holy freaking cow!!! that's awesome!!!

2005-09-18 [Ego Diligo Tu]: yup yup did you get the copy yet?

2005-09-19 [Moving on in Life]: *lightly smacks, Forgotten's ass and winks at her*

2005-09-20 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks* cough well ill leave you all be*begins to walk out*

2005-09-21 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *slowly turns to look at you, then santers over there* ooo gettin touchy are we? *leans forward and puts hands on your chest, slowly mvoing them all over you* *looks at liz* why? i highly doubt this embarrasses you

2005-09-21 [Moving on in Life]: *pulls Forgotten close into a deep kiss, grabbing at her chest*

2005-09-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles and laughs reading news paper* figured youd like privacy

2005-09-21 [Moving on in Life]: I don't care. I'm shameless. it's up to her, really

2005-09-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs adn flashes terini by pulling up jamies shirt* shes not shameless but i am just ask her ive changed infront of lots of people*begins changing as she talks*

2005-09-21 [Moving on in Life]: well, we're all shamelss, then...*strips down nude for all the ladies*

2005-09-21 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *luaghs* not jamie jamies not shameless shell be shocked*thinsk pouting* do you know where the black sequined thong i had is?

2005-09-22 [Moving on in Life]: Oh, yeah..double the fun..TWO women! *kisses forgotten, and blows a kiss to Love*

2005-09-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *grins and plops down in terinis lap* boo

2005-09-23 [Moving on in Life]: Oh yeah! *looks down* I am still naked, you know... :D and being around two women hittin on me, unless you want action, sitting on my lap is the LAST thing you want ;)

2005-09-23 [Moving on in Life]: oh yeah, I just made a new wiki, and want as many people to join up. It's called Insanity's Finest

2005-09-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *shrugs* I ahve clothes on so im ok*winks*

2005-09-23 [Moving on in Life]: SO, still, the thought's there. *winks back*

2005-09-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: oh fine if you dont WANT me to be in your lap*goes to move*

2005-09-23 [Moving on in Life]: No, you can stay, I was just implying the comfort of your choice

2005-09-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs and cuddles falling asleep on terini*

2005-09-23 [Moving on in Life]: YAY! *slowly undresses Love, snickering*

2005-09-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks when shirts is half off stretching* what in the...

2005-09-23 [omgOMEGA]: since when did this page turn into a porno movie?

2005-09-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *grins* now

2005-09-23 [Moving on in Life]: *quickly strips Love, and looks around like nothing ever happened* You were stripping for me :D

2005-09-23 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *blinks and shrugs* well i guess im done then

2005-09-24 [omgOMEGA]: 8-O

2005-09-24 [tenshi-ryuu]: XD

2005-09-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *gets dressed and giggles* who may i ask were you stripping for brandon?

2005-09-24 [omgOMEGA]: 8-O *shakes head* 8-<

2005-09-24 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs and ties up carrot* calm yourslef

2005-09-24 [Moving on in Life]: Anyone who wants to watch...be it male or female :D cause I'm sick like that

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs* not sick just sexy

2005-09-25 [Moving on in Life]: mwahahaha, I know..ain't it great?

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: *spins around but is still tied up*

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs and pokes carot with a stick* oo look brandon she twitches!!

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: *snarls and bares pointed teeth*

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hides behinde brandon* eep protect em from teh scaryt hing!

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: *escapes and starts gnashing people (don't ask why)* I'll stop if you vote on my poll!

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *starts crying*

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: *continues gnashing* My conscience escaped when you tied me up.

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *throws red wildberry skittles(the kind I DONT like) at carrot* leave me aloen!!!

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: oo I like them! *catches them in jaws, whilst still gnashing* NO! NOT UNTIL YOU VOTE ON MY POLL!

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *screams ok ok im going!

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: yey!

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: i did it okay?

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: Yey! What did you vote for?

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: umm id ont remeber

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: Grrr....

2005-09-25 [Moving on in Life]: hey, now, I already voted! I said keep it the same name!

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: alrighty then.... you had better have!

2005-09-25 [Moving on in Life]: so, HA! You have to stop :P

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: no, I have to get everyone on the wiki to vote first!

2005-09-25 [Moving on in Life]: Well, you can at least stop gnashing at ME *smiles wide*

2005-09-25 [omgOMEGA]: nope! *gnash gnash*

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *whimpers still hiding*

2005-09-25 [Moving on in Life]: *kicks Carrot in the shins*

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *giggles and smiles then jumps up n down* yay brandon!

2005-09-25 [Moving on in Life]: Booya!

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *hugs brandon*

2005-09-25 [Moving on in Life]: yay!

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs* why yay?

2005-09-25 [Moving on in Life]: I dunno.

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *grins* ahhh i see*yawnms and stretches using brandon as a pillow again this time head in his lap*

2005-09-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *fast forwards through all the boring stuff, stopping and slowing at the stripping part* haha, i hate missing this kind stuff! and liz, i am too shameless, i just behave myself arround benj i have got to have hypnotic!!! *goes into the kitchen and emergesbearing a bottle of hypnotic, a bag of tropical skittles, and considerably less clothing* there we go, it was getting humid...*plops down on sette', tucks legs up and starts writing*

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *grabs skittles and randomly puts thm on people eatign them off*

2005-09-25 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *hides from the putting-skittles-on-ppl-and-eating-them-off love*

2005-09-25 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *finds jamie adn eats skittle off her head*

2005-09-26 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *mouth makes an 'o' and looks up in fear*

2005-09-26 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs adn grins down*

2005-09-26 [Moving on in Life]: If I were you, I wouldn't be resting your head on mylap unless you plan on makin me happy. I ain't dressed quite yet >;)

2005-09-27 [Your Favorite Stranger]: *perks up at that* go ahead liz, make him happy, i like seeing guys when they're happy...especially when they ain't quite dressed yet

2005-09-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *coughsfiancecoughs* sorry most i perosanly can do is kiss have to look for jaimie on that one*eats a skittle off brandons lap*

2005-09-27 [omgOMEGA]: and we're back at the porn!

2005-09-27 [Moving on in Life]: oh yeah*is happy*

2005-09-27 [omgOMEGA]: must - wash - eyes!!!

2005-09-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *laughs*

2005-09-27 [Moving on in Life]: Forgotten...I'm wai-ting!

2005-09-27 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *bites brandon softly*

2005-09-27 [Moving on in Life]: *nibbles back* I'm saving up for Forgotten..So, wait your turn, okay? *winks*

2005-09-28 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pouts* why do they always pick jamie first hmph

2005-09-28 [Moving on in Life]: because.. we have a history together. I've donee all these things, and she owes me now... *grins*

2005-09-28 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *pouts* hmph

2005-09-28 [Moving on in Life]: you'll cu...er..come soon enough. :D

2005-09-28 [Ego Diligo Tu]: *loosk at you* no what were you gonna say??

2005-09-28 [Moving on in Life]: nothing..:D

2005-09-28 [Ego Diligo Tu]: noo please tell me*does puppy dog eyes*

2005-09-28 [Moving on in Life]: I think you know ;)

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